Turntable Jack

You are danger you break everything in sight. This is a great opening line to start a poem and I really like it. However, you are missing something in between ...

The hard part is that I need not a simple traitor, but someone who sort of went from one side to the other, with no real allegiance to anyone. Could ...

That is a very good picture for a ten year old. I am not sure if a 10 year old needs feedback, but I would say to make sure to ...

Just to point one thing out, you need too reviews before posting work. Alright, now or a quick few suggestions. 1) I understand you are going for a bold statement, ...

Thank you! i appreciate your reply I was beginning to feel like maybe this was another Kak poem of mine LOL kak (crap, shit , really bad lol) Well you ...

Here you go. It is not as long as it seems because the "chorus" is repeated a lot and is long. Hello, I am seventeen and my name is Debbie, ...

Grammar Fixes and Such Your skin is soft supple and y outhful . Y ou must have been sent upon wings of a dove ; For you resemble Aphrodite the ...

well, are you looking for any type of forum, a writing forum, or anything fun at all on the web?

Welcome to the forums and I hope this place will help with anything you need help on. Also, good luck on learning Japanese, very good choice of a language to ...

well, even if it doesn't help me in their vies, it will definitely help me personally. Also, the other place I am looking at is So if anyone else can ...

I am working on my first book that I want to publish, but I want to self-publish it for several reasons. One, it is my first book and I don't ...

Based on the suggestions of various members, The Writers Corner is the newest addition to YWS. Here you can post the progress you are making on your novella, novel, or ...

well, I am writing a book, and I have one major problem. Tenses. I cannot seem to write in the correct tense. The book is story being told by the ...

Well, I have been writing a book for awhile, but I have been doing mroe thinking and planning than actually writing. I have the whole plot thought off and detailed ...

Well, I feel like I am a different kind of writer, and I want to see if their are others who are in the same boat as me. I very ...